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第7289篇红婵清华北大学霸笔记1.定语从句:

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1.定语从句:that/which在从句内部充当主语或者宾语,作宾语时可以省略;修饰前面普通名词。

The phenomenon that we observe in countryside is worth thinking about.我们在乡村观察到的现象值得思考。(that充当observe的宾语,定语从句)

2.同位语从句:that不作句子任何成分,只起到连接解释作用,that绝对不能省略;修饰抽象名词opinion, thought, idea, belief, fact, phenomenon。

We hold the fact that science comes from daily life.我们认可这样一个事实:科学来源于日常生活。(that不充当成分,同位语从句)

快速区分小技巧:把that后面从句内容拿出来,能否等价替换前面的名词,等价就是同位语从句;名词在从句里面充当成分,就是定语从句。

3.限制性定语从句与非限制性定语从句

非限制性定语从句用逗号隔开,不能用that引导,可以用which,用来补充说明整件事或者先行词。

Science brings great convenience to our life, which is known to all.科学给我们生活带来巨大便利,这是众所周知的。

高频易错红笔记录:

①同位语从句that无实义,不充当成分,不可省略;

②非限制性定语从句,不能使用that;

③phenomenon单数;phenomena复数,考试经常考变形。

时空智者的思绪缓缓散开:看待世间事物如同分辨两类从句,既要看见事物本身,也要看清附加在事物之上的观点,分清客观事实与主观看法,方能拥有清醒的思辨。

语法要点梳理完毕,红婵儿进入书面表达专项训练。本单元写作任务议论文:Respect science, keep critical thinking尊重科学,保持批判性思维。剖析青少年两类错误认知:认为科学远离普通人,把科学知识只当作考试考点,脱离现实生活;盲目迷信科技,认为科技万能,无视科技带来的各类隐患。阐述科学源于生活,乡村生活处处可以看见科学的影子,科技工具本身是中立的,好坏取决于人类如何使用。青年既要尊重科学、善用科技成果,同时保有独立批判性思考,把书本知识和现实观察结合,成长为理性的新时代青年。

搭建完整行文框架。

开篇:科学渗透日常生活方方面面,改变乡村衣食住行,但是不少青少年对待科学存在片面认知,走向两种极端。

主体第一段:阐述两类错误观念。一部分学生觉得科学专属于科研人员,将课本科学知识与现实割裂,学习只为应付考试,看不见乡土生活之中的科学应用;另一部分同学盲目崇拜科技,相信科技可以化解一切社会难题,忽视科技潜藏的弊端,丢失独立思考。

主体第二段:阐明科学真正内涵。科学源于生活,服务生活,乡村灌溉、太阳能设备、线上网课都是科学的成果。科技本身保持中立,是使用者决定它带来益处还是危害。我们可以借助英语阅读,了解世界各地科技发展,拓宽自身眼界。

主体第三段:提出青年的正确做法。尊重科学,主动观察生活里的科学现象,把书本所学和现实结合;同时坚持批判性思维,不盲目全盘追捧新技术,客观看待利弊。奔赴北大的求学路上,分数之外,理性思辨能力同样不可或缺。

结尾:呼吁当代青少年尊重科学,善用科技,守住独立判断,做顺应时代的思考者。

收纳高频写作句式记入笔记。

开篇引入

Science has deeply changed every corner of people’s daily life, including rural areas.科学深刻改变了人们日常生活的方方面面,也包括乡村地区。

Quite a number of teenagers have one‑sided understanding of science and technology.相当一部分青少年对科学技术有着片面的理解。

意义阐述句型

Science itself is neutral. Its influence lies in the way human beings make use of it.科学本身是中立的,它的影响在于人类使用它的方式。

We should combine our textbook knowledge with real‑life observation.我们应当将课本知识和现实生活观察结合起来。

倡议表达句型

We ought to respect science, meanwhile we must keep our critical thinking.我们应当尊重科学,同时必须保持批判性思维。

Do not regard knowledge as cold symbols only for examinations.不要把知识仅仅看作应付考试的冰冷符号。

收尾升华

Only when we respect science and keep independent judgment can we grow into qualified teenagers of the new era.只有我们尊重科学并且保有独立判断,我们才能成长为新时代合格青年。1

段评

这个英语语法讲得好清楚

完整范文红婵儿逐行抄写,同步标注亮点短语与句式。

Respect science, keep critical thinking

Science is everywhere in our daily life. It is no longer locked inside laboratories. In rural villages, new irrigation technology improves farm production, solar equipment supplies clean energy and online medical services offer villagers convenient medical advice. Science greatly improves ordinary people’s living standards. However, many teenagers hold one‑sided opinions towards science.

Some teenagers think science belongs only to scientists and experts. They separate scientific knowledge in textbooks from real‑world life. For them, science‑related texts and exercises are nothing but examination tasks. They memorize words and analyze sentences merely for high scores. Once exams are finished, they never connect knowledge with what they see in their hometown. They fail to notice how science changes farming, public facilities and daily family life. Their knowledge remains only on paper. On the other hand, some teenagers worship technology blindly. They believe science can solve all social problems. They accept every new technological achievement without questioning. They ignore potential risks brought by technological development. Actually, technology may cause environmental pressure and information safety troubles. Neither treating science as distant knowledge nor admiring technology blindly is a wise choice.

Science comes from life and serves life. We can find scientific fruits around rural teenagers. Advanced farm tools, solar street lights and online learning resources are all gifts brought by science. Learning English offers us a chance to read foreign materials about science, broadening our horizons. It is worth noticing that science itself is neutral. Whether it brings benefits or harms depends on human beings’ choices. Advanced technology is a powerful tool, but it cannot be completely trusted without thinking.

As high‑school students dreaming of top universities, we should respect science and make good use of its achievements. At the same time, critical thinking cannot be abandoned. We should observe real‑life phenomena around us and link book knowledge with reality. We should not accept new ideas blindly. We need to judge advantages and disadvantages with our own minds.

Let us respect science and keep independent judgment. Only in this way can we grow into thoughtful young people suitable for the development of our times.

亮点批注:living standards生活水平;nothing but只不过;potential risks潜在风险;abandon critical thinking放弃批判性思维;independent judgment独立判断。

誊写完范文之后红婵儿自主改写一篇短文,变换措辞锻炼灵活表达的能力。

Respect science, keep critical thinking

Modern science has greatly transformed rural daily life. From farming production to public services, scientific achievements can be seen everywhere. Yet lots of teenagers form wrong views on science.

Some students view science as something far away from ordinary students. They study scientific knowledge just to deal with examinations. They never connect what they learn with the real countryside. Their knowledge cannot turn into practical thinking. Other teenagers admire high‑tech products blindly. They expect technology to settle all social difficulties, ignoring various hidden risks. These two attitudes prevent us from understanding science correctly.

Science originates from real‑life observation. Many technologies we use in villages are products of science. By reading English articles on science, we can learn more international ideas. It is important to remember that science is neutral. The value of technology is decided by people who use it.

While we respect science, we must develop critical thinking. We should combine textbook learning with real‑world experience. We need to think independently instead of following popular opinions without consideration. On our long road toward Peking University, developing rational thinking is as important as getting high marks.

Let us treat science rationally. With independent thinking, we can make better use of scientific achievements and become promising young people of the new age.

对照两篇文稿,红婵儿记下心得。科技科学主题议论文,抓住远离生活、盲目崇拜科技两大误区;分清定语从句与同位语从句,牢记phenomenon复数phenomena;熟练掌握only+状语倒装句式;critical thinking、neutral、confine等词汇是本单元写作加分核心;立意重点突出尊重科学同时保持批判性思维,知识要联系现实生活。

笔记推进至错题复盘板块,把随堂练习之中出错的题目完整记录下来,标注出错缘由。

错题一语法填空:We hold the view ______ science comes from daily life.

同位语从句引导词填that。红婵儿误填which。批注view是抽象名词,that解释观点内容,同位语从句不用which。

错题二单项选择:The phenomenon ______ we are studying is common in rural areas.

A.what B.that C.who D.whose

定语从句that充当study宾语,选B。错选what。批注what不能引导定语从句。

错题三语法填空:Only by observing real‑life phenomena ______(we,develop) our critical thinking.

only+介词短语放句首部分倒装,填can we develop。红婵儿未使用倒装语序。

错题四改错:Phenomenon in countryside show the power of modern science.

谓语show为复数,主语改为Phenomena。批注phenomenon单数,复数形式phenomena。

整理完错题,红婵儿放下笔望向窗外。暮色铺满远处田野,村口太阳能路灯次第亮起柔和光芒,恰好印证本单元课文讲述的科学改变乡村生活。写完这篇笔记,红婵儿心中深有感触。科学不是遥不可及的实验室故事,就藏在家乡的田间地头。学习英语阅读国外科普文章,不只是为考卷得分,更是借语言打开一扇窗口,学会理性看待科技,既要接纳科学带来的便利,也要守住自己独立的思考。厚厚的英语学霸笔记一页页持续累积,英语带给她的不只是应试本领,更教会她辩证看待世界的思维方式,支撑她一步步向着北大的梦想稳步前行。

时空智者的意念慢慢消散在温柔的夜色之中,思绪落在纸页之上:科学给予我们认识世界的工具,而独立思考,教会我们如何善用这份工具。

红婵儿拿起笔,在笔记末尾写下独属于自己的感悟。

本单元掌握科学与日常生活主题词汇,重点辨析定语从句与同位语从句;牢记phenomenon复数phenomena;巩固only置于句首部分倒装。青少年两大认知误区:认为科学远离普通人,知识只服务考试,脱离现实;盲目迷信科技万能,忽视科技潜藏风险。科学源于生活、服务生活,在乡村随处可见科学成果,科技本身是中立的,效果取决于使用者。求学路上既要尊重科学,也要坚持批判性思维,将课本知识与现实观察结合,培养理性独立的思维,奔赴理想学府。

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