第7141篇红婵学霸笔记高频易错要点红笔记录

高频易错要点红笔记录：

①that不能引导非限制性定语从句；介词后面不用that，只用which/whom。

This is the activity in which many students take part.（正确）

This is the activity in that many students take part.（错误）

②whose既可指人也可指物，表示所属关系。

We visited the old man whose life was greatly changed by volunteers.我们拜访了那位生活被志愿者极大改善的老人。

③区分where/when/why关系副词，从句句子成分完整，不缺主语宾语，才选用副词。

This is the community where many volunteers work.（从句work完整，缺地点状语，用where）

英格索尔的思绪缓缓飘散开来。

定语从句，给名词补充更多细节。就像一件善举，不只有“帮助他人”这个主干，还藏着耐心、真诚、责任这些珍贵的细节。看待人与事，不只看表面，更要看背后内在的品质。

语法要点梳理完毕，红婵儿转入书面表达专项训练。本单元写作任务倡议书：Be a volunteer做一名志愿者，纠正学生对志愿活动的误区，讲明志愿活动意义，号召同学们从身边小事做起参与志愿服务。

搭建完整行文框架。

开篇：志愿服务是青年承担社会责任的重要方式，不少同学对志愿活动存有误解，认为离自己十分遥远。

主体第一段：阐明志愿的真正含义，不一定远赴他乡，身边就有很多可以参与的志愿机会；志愿既能帮助他人，也能促进自我成长。

主体第二段：提醒我们作为学生，学习仍是首要任务，要平衡课业与志愿，不必追求大型项目，从小事着手。

主体第三段：志愿不求掌声回报，贵在真心，点滴善意汇聚就可以温暖社会。

结尾：发出倡议，行动从当下开始。

收纳高频写作句式记入笔记。

开篇引入

Volunteering is a good way for teenagers to take social responsibility.志愿服务是青少年承担社会责任的良好途径。

Some of us think volunteer work is far away from our school life.我们当中一部分人认为志愿工作离校园生活十分遥远。

意义阐述句型

Not only do volunteers bring warmth to others, but they also gain personal growth.志愿者不仅给他人带去温暖，自身也获得成长。

Volunteering offers us a chance to step out of textbooks and touch real society.志愿活动给我们走出课本接触真实社会的机会。

倡议表达句型

We do not need special skills or much money to be volunteers.成为志愿者我们不需要特殊技能或是大量金钱。

Let us start with small things around us.让我们从身边小事做起。

收尾升华

Small kindnesses can make a big difference to the world.微小善意可以对世界产生巨大影响。

完整范文红婵儿逐行抄写，同步标注亮点短语与句式。

Be a volunteer

Dear fellow students,

Volunteering is a valuable form of social service, through which teenagers can take our social responsibility. However, many of us hold a wrong opinion. We regard volunteering as large‑scale projects in distant places and believe it has little connection with our daily school life. In fact, voluntary work is just around us.

Volunteering means giving our time and energy to help people in need without money rewards. It does not require great ability or rich wealth. We can give free tutoring to classmates with study difficulties, keep our community clean, or accompany lonely elderly people nearby. These simple acts are all volunteer work.

Volunteering brings double benefits. For people receiving help, our support brings comfort and hope. For us volunteers, it is also a precious growing experience. We will walk out of the world of textbooks, meet different people and learn to be more considerate and responsible. What we learn in class can be put into real practice.

Still, we should remember that study remains our main task. We must keep a good balance between schoolwork and volunteer activities. We do not have to take part in grand activities. Sincere care counts more than splendid performances. True volunteer spirit never depends on praise from others.

Small drops of water can form a vast ocean. Every small act of kindness matters. Let us take action right now and be warm‑hearted volunteers with our own hands.

亮点批注：through which介词+关系代词定语从句；regard…as把……看作；double benefits双重益处；put…into practice付诸实践；count more than比……更为重要。

誊写完范文之后红婵儿自主改写一篇短文，变换措辞锻炼灵活表达的能力。

Be a volunteer

Dear schoolmates,

Nowadays more and more people take part in volunteer service. Yet some teenagers think being a volunteer is something for adults. They suppose voluntary work must be impressive events far away from home. This is actually a misunderstanding.

Volunteering refers to offering help without payment. Plenty of chances lie in our neighbourhood and school. We can help those who are in trouble around us. When we serve others, we are not only giving warmth, but also gaining growth ourselves. We will learn to understand society better and develop good qualities such as responsibility and gratitude.

Of course, we should never ignore our studies. We need to arrange our time properly and avoid letting volunteer work influence our lessons greatly. We can begin with little things. Even listening patiently to a lonely old person is meaningful volunteer behaviour. It is our sincere heart rather than great achievements that matters most.

Youth is the time to give out light and warmth. Let us do what we can and pass on kindness to people around us.

对照两篇文稿，红婵儿记下心得。倡议书语气要恳切，不要空洞喊口号，一定要写出学生可落地的具体小事；非限制性定语从句、介词+which结构适当使用提升作文档次；区分同位语从句与定语从句，考试改错高频考点。

笔记推进至错题复盘板块，把随堂练习之中出错的题目完整记录下来，标注出错缘由。

错题一语法填空

We have the belief ______ small volunteer actions can change our community.

填that，同位语从句解释belief内容，that不充当成分。红婵儿误填which。批注：同位语从句that不作成分；定语从句that充当主宾。

错题二单项选择

Many students join volunteer activities, ______ helps them build good personalities.

A.that B.which C.what D.who

正确选项B，非限制性定语从句指代整件事，不能用that。错选A。

错题三语法填空

He volunteers ______(help) the kids with their lessons every weekend.

填to help，volunteer to do sth自愿做某事。红婵儿错填helping。

错题四改错

Devote ourselves to volunteer work, we learn a lot about real society.

devote和主句主语we是主动关系，Devote改为Devoting，非谓语作状语。

整理完错题，红婵儿放下笔望向窗外。村口路上，几名学生正帮村里老人捡拾路边垃圾，简简单单的举动，却满是暖意。读书求知不只是为个人前途，青年成长，同样要学会看见身边人的难处。志愿不一定奔赴远方，校园、村落，处处都可以释放善意。厚厚的笔记一页页累积，英语带给她的，不止是试卷上的分数，更是看待世界的另一种眼光。

英格索尔的身影慢慢消散在光影之间，留下思绪落在纸页：

人在托举他人之时，自身也随之向上。不必等待拥有足够强大才去行善，当下拥有多少，就付出多少。读书求学识，行善修本心，二者从来不相冲突。

红婵儿拿起笔，在笔记末尾写下独属于自己的感悟。

本单元掌握志愿服务主题词汇，重点巩固限制性、非限制性定语从句，分清同位语从句与定语从句的区别。志愿服务并非只有远方宏大项目，身边点滴小事同样属于志愿。志愿既能帮扶他人，也能磨炼自我品格。作为学生，我们要平衡好学业与公益，真诚的善意远比场面与赞美更加重要。少年成长，既要深耕书本，也要心怀他人，力所能及回馈周遭世界。

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