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第520篇红婵学霸笔记长难句四

全红婵儿的北大之路英语学霸笔记

长难句四:We borrow this planet from later generations, so we have the duty to hand over a beautiful and livable world to them.

borrow…from…向……借来;have the duty to do sth有义务做某事;hand over移交。

译文:我们是向后辈借来这颗星球,因此我们有责任把一个美丽宜居的世界交还给他们。

整篇课文长难句解析完毕,红婵儿梳理本单元核心语法:非谓语动词综合复盘(to do / doing / done)。

非谓语动词不充当句子谓语,分为不定式to do,动名词/现在分词doing,过去分词done,是高中英语语法填空、改错最高频考点。

1.不定式to do:常表目的、将来、结果。

目的:We should try our best to protect the environment.我们应当尽全力保护环境。

固定搭配:decide to do;refuse to do;manage to do;have the duty to do。

2.doing动名词/现在分词:动名词可作主语宾语;现在分词表主动、进行,常作定语、状语、补语。

作主语:Saving water is a simple way of environmental protection.节约用水是一种简单的环保方式。

作伴随状语:Many students walked along the river, picking up rubbish.许多学生沿着河边行走,捡拾垃圾。

3.done过去分词:表被动、完成,作定语状语补语。

Polluted rivers need to be repaired.被污染的河流需要得到治理。(polluted过去分词作定语)

4.重点辨析

stop to do停下来去做另一件事;stop doing停止正在做的事

remember to do记得要去做;remember doing记得做过

regret to do遗憾要做;regret doing后悔做过

高频易错红笔记录:

①非谓语不能充当句子谓语,一个简单句只能有一个谓语动词,其余动词变非谓语。

②doing表主动进行;done表被动完成。

③介词后面接动名词doing,不要误用to do。

④感官动词see/watch/hear,see sb do看见某人做全过程;see sb doing看见某人正在做。

时空智者的思绪缓缓飘散开来。

非谓语动词可以表达目的、主动与被动。守护环境亦是如此,心怀保护的目标,主动付出行动,才能改变已经被破坏的现状。想法停留在脑海只是空想,落实为行动才拥有力量。

语法要点梳理完毕,红婵儿转入书面表达专项训练。本单元写作任务倡议书:Green actions start from us绿色行动从我做起。指出当下存在的环境问题,批判青少年两类错误心态:认为个人力量微不足道,环保只是政府的事;只空谈环保口号却不愿改变自身行为。呼吁大家从身边小事做起,节约资源、垃圾分类、减少一次性用品,带动身边人共同参与,守护我们共同的地球家园。

搭建完整行文框架。

开篇:如今环境污染问题愈发严峻,保护地球家园刻不容缓,但是不少青少年对待环保存在错误认知。

主体第一段:分析两种错误心态:认为环保是政府的责任,个人努力无足轻重,生活肆意浪费资源;知晓环保重要,却只停留在口头,不肯改变日常习惯,两种心态不利于生态保护。

主体第二段:阐释个体力量不可忽视,无数微小行动汇聚就可以产生巨大改变。环保不需要惊天动地的大事,落实于点滴日常:节约水电,垃圾分类,减少一次性产品,杜绝食物浪费,爱护花草生灵。乡村学生可以参与植树、清理垃圾,带动家人建立绿色生活方式。

主体第三段:社会各方共同发力,政府完善法规,企业承担社会责任,而我们青少年也要尽自己一份力量。我们向子孙后代借来地球,有义务留下宜居的家园。

结尾:发出倡议,行动胜于空谈,让我们从自身做起,从小事做起,共建绿色美好家园。

收纳高频写作句式记入笔记。

开篇引入

Nowadays environmental problems have become increasingly serious.如今环境问题变得愈发严峻。

It is high time that we took action to protect our only home—the earth.我们早该行动起来保护我们唯一的家园——地球。

意义阐述句型

Small individual efforts can add up to great power.个体微小的努力可以汇聚成巨大力量。

Talking is not equal to acting.行动不等同于空谈。

倡议表达句型

We are supposed to form eco‑friendly habits in our daily life.我们应当在日常生活养成环保习惯。

Every one of us can do our part for environmental protection.我们每一个人都可以为环境保护尽一份力。

收尾升华

Let us take small green actions from now on, so that we can hand a beautiful earth to later generations.让我们从现在做起践行微小的绿色行动,把美丽的地球交予后代。

完整范文红婵儿逐行抄写,同步标注亮点短语与句式。

Green actions start from us

Dear fellow students,

Nowadays, pollution of air, water and soil has become more and more serious. Global warming also brings new challenges to human beings. Protecting the environment is an urgent task for the whole world. However, many teenagers hold wrong opinions on this topic.

Some of us believe environmental protection belongs only to the government and social organizations. They argue that students’ small actions can hardly make a difference. Therefore, they waste water and electricity, throw rubbish casually and use quantities of disposable products. They never realize bad personal habits will gradually damage nature. Some other students are fully aware of the importance of green development. They often talk about environmental problems, but they refuse to change their own lifestyles. They still keep wasteful habits in daily life. Empty words cannot improve our environment.

It is true that official rules and large‑scale projects play key roles, yet we should never overlook individual power. Thousands of tiny good deeds can create amazing changes. We do not need to perform great tasks to protect nature. Green actions lie in little things around us. We can save water and electricity at home and at school. We ought to sort rubbish properly and cut down the use of disposable goods. We should avoid food waste and choose reusable bags while shopping. As students living in the countryside, we can take part in tree‑planting activities, pick up rubbish in wild areas, and remind our family members to live eco‑friendly lives.

Protecting the earth requires joint efforts of all people. The government should carry out strict policies against pollution. Enterprises need to take social responsibility to reduce waste. As teenagers, we also have our own duty. We borrow this planet from future generations, so we should leave them a livable world.

Actions speak louder than words. Let us start with small things right around us. Every small effort counts. Only in this way can we build a greener and more beautiful home.

亮点批注:urgent task紧迫任务;quantities of大量;overlook忽视;large‑scale projects大规模工程;reusable bags可重复使用袋子;Actions speak louder than words行动胜于言语。

誊写完范文之后红婵儿自主改写一篇短文,变换措辞锻炼灵活表达的能力。

Green actions start from us

Dear classmates,

Our earth is suffering from different kinds of environmental problems at present. Water and air pollution, loss of wildlife habitats and waste of resources have threatened our living conditions. It is necessary for every teenager to think about what we can do for nature.

Quite a few students think that environmental protection has nothing to do with ordinary students. They suppose that nothing will be changed by personal small moves, so they keep wasteful habits. Other students praise green ideas but seldom put them into practice. They enjoy talking about environmental problems without adjusting their own daily behavior. In fact, neither thought is correct.

Individual influence should not be ignored. When plenty of people develop green habits, the power will be surprising. We need not complete impressive big projects. Many simple acts can help our environment. We can turn off lights to save electricity, sort rubbish and stay away from disposable goods. We should value food and avoid unnecessary waste. Living in villages, we have chances to get close to nature. We can join in public‑benefit activities such as planting trees and cleaning riversides. What is more, we can spread green ideas among our family and friends.

Saving our planet calls for joint efforts. Besides measures taken by the government and companies, each ordinary citizen should take responsibility. Since we borrow the earth from children in the future, we are supposed to keep it beautiful for them.

Do not wait for others to take action. Let us do our part right now. Small steps can make a big difference for our shared home.

对照两篇文稿,红婵儿记下心得。环保倡议书,要批判两种错误认知:轻视个人力量、只讲口号不行动;熟练掌握非谓语动词to do / doing / done,分清主动被动;介词后接doing;区分stop、remember、regret搭配to do和doing的不同含义;条件状语从句主将从现;写作可以使用Actions speak louder than words这类谚语提升文采。

笔记推进至错题复盘板块,把随堂练习之中出错的题目完整记录下来,标注出错缘由。

错题一语法填空:______(save) energy is one of the simplest ways to protect the environment.

动名词作句子主语,填Saving。红婵儿误填Save。批注句子已有谓语is,动词作主语要变为动名词doing。

错题二单项选择:He stopped (use) disposable plastic bags in order to protect the environment.

A.to use B.using C.use D.used

stop doing停止正在做的事,选B。错选A。批注stop to do停下来去做另一件事;stop doing停止正在做。

错题三语法填空:(pollute) water is harmful to living things.

过去分词作定语表被动,填Polluted。红婵儿误填Polluting。批注polluted被污染的;polluting表示主动,意为“带来污染的”。

错题四改错:See many students plant trees, I realized the power of small actions.

现在分词作伴随状语,See改为Seeing。

整理完错题,红婵儿放下笔望向窗外。清风拂过远处的山林,草木随风轻轻摇曳。写完这一单元笔记,红婵儿内心有所感悟:保护环境不是遥远宏大的口号,不是只属于政府大人的任务。我们学生个体力量虽小,但千千万万人的微小行动汇聚在一起,就可以产生巨大改变。节约水电、做好垃圾分类、拒绝一次性用品,都是触手可及的环保。我们向后代借来这片土地,理应留给他们一个山清水秀的家园。厚厚的学霸笔记一页页继续堆叠,英语带给她的不只是试卷分数,更教会她敬畏自然,明白行动的价值,不做空谈者,做脚踏实地的践行者。

时空智者的意念慢慢消散在阵阵清风之中,留下思绪落在纸页:地球不是祖先赠予的私产,而是向后代借来的家园。不要轻视微小的行动,行动永远胜过空洞的言语。

红婵儿拿起笔,在笔记末尾写下独属于自己的感悟。

本单元掌握环境保护主题词汇,重点复盘非谓语动词to do / doing / done;doing表主动进行;done表被动完成;介词后面接doing;分清stop、remember、regret后接to do与doing的语义差异;一个简单句只能有一个谓语,其余动词用非谓语。环保存在两类误区:认为个人无足轻重;只空谈口号不落实行动。环保不需要惊天动地的大事,蕴藏在生活点滴之中。青少年要从身边小事做起,带动身边人,众人共同努力,守护我们唯一的地球家园。

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